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# 1   2007-10-20 14:02:26 Typographical corrections to the application note (number 53) (project: Tutorial (Cubic) 1.1)

dalewheat
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Typographical corrections to the application note (number 53) (project: Tutorial (Cubic) 1.1)

Working through the excellent tutorial (thanks, Francis!), I found some small, typographical errors that could be corrected in the next (if any) revision.  My suggestions are based on American English usage.

Page 1, above the Table of Contents:  "correclty" should be "correctly"
Page 3, 2nd bullet point:  "int the application" should be "in the application" (program C much? smile
Page 3, section 1.4:  "an USB port" should be "a USB port"
Page 4, 1st bullet point:  "how to use it's functions" should be "how to use its functions"
Page 8, section 2.2, 3rd paragraph:  "definition/declations" should be "definitions/declarations"
Page 8, section 2.2, 6th paragraph:  "Thats all" should be "That's all"
Page 8, section 2.2, 7th paragraph:  "tha application" should be "the application", "that sould" should be "that should"
Page 9, paragraph 2:  "Bild the application" should be "Build the application"
Page 11, paragraph 1:  "we use can use" should be "we can use"
Page 11, 4th code example:  "Int Current_Height - SQUARE_WIDTH;" should be "int Current_Height = SQUARE_WIDTH;"
Page 11, 4th code example:  "S16 Initial_MEMS_Y;" should be "s16 Initial_MEMS_Y;"
Page 12, paragraph 3:  "Build tha application" should be "Build the application"
Page 12, paragraph 4 seems to be a reworded repetiton of paragraph 3
Page 13, chapter heading:  "making the moves more fluent" should be "making the moves more fluid"
Page 13, paragraph 2:  "so it wouldbe" should be "so it would be"
Page 13, paragraph 2:  "parts of the rectangle that has changed" should be "parts of the rectangle that have changed"
Page 13, paragraph 3:  "the part of the LCD monitor that need to be" should be "the part of the LCD monitor that needs to be"
Page 15, paragraph 1:  "have lees to draw for each movememnt" should be "have less to draw for each movement"
Page 15, paragraph 2:  "This colcludes step3" should be "This concludes step3"
Page 15, paragraph 2:  "more practicle" should be "more practical"
Page 16, paragraph 1:  "As withthe previous" should be "As with the previous"
Page 16, paragraph 1:  "to the porject" should be "to the project"
Page 16, paragraph 2:  "two axis" should be "two axes"
Page 16, paragraph 2:  "show thedirection" should be "show the direction"
Page 16, paragraph 5:  "will be null" should be "will be zero" (not the same thing in English or in C)
Page 16, paragraph 8:  "two axis" should be "two axes"
Page 20, paragraph 1:  "into oyur application" should be "into your application"
Page 20, paragraph 1:  "whatch out for" should be "watch out for"
Page 20, paragraph 1:  "inserted ot show" should be "inserted to show"
Page 20, paragraph 2:  "need ot build" should be "need to build"
Page 20, paragraph 2:  "and the Run" should be "and then Run"

These are all just simple typos.  The content of the tutorial is excellent and I appreciate the detail that was put into this project.

Thanks,

Dale Wheat

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# 2   2007-10-20 17:29:16 Typographical corrections to the application note (number 53) (project: Tutorial (Cubic) 1.1)

Francis
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From: France-Grenoble
Registered: 2007-07-09
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Re: Typographical corrections to the application note (number 53) (project: Tutorial (Cubic) 1.1)

Thanks Dale!
I will fix these errors as soon as possible.

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# 3   2007-10-22 09:59:04 Typographical corrections to the application note (number 53) (project: Tutorial (Cubic) 1.1)

Francis
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Re: Typographical corrections to the application note (number 53) (project: Tutorial (Cubic) 1.1)

The errors have been fixed ... Thanks again!

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